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Ok so heres a song by avril lavigne i just learned. I havent got the whole thing but when I do I'll definitly keep you all updated. So yeah. shit and piss

i wish i was a good writer, i have no imagination... wtf... i wasnt meant to be creative ima try to write..

she smells the stuffed animal dog he gave her just the day before as a gift. it smells like him and she kisses it and hugs it. it has a cute crooked face and is extremly soft to touch.

she lies in her bed just awaking in her boyfriends boxers and a band tee. she smells the dog one more time and gets up to pour herself a hot cup of joe. its raining outside and shes freezing, she was hoping it would snow.

everyone was still asleep so she turns on the tv in the big chair in their living room. she flips the channels and immediatly is bored.

"why can't i have a more exciting life?!" she says as she turns the tv off and stares at the black screen. the phone rings and she jumps spilling coffee on her lap.

"hello..?"

"hey is this kate?" the guy on the other line asks, she assumes its victor her boyfriend.

"yeah this is she, is this victor?"

"yeah good guess." She assumes right.

"I wasn't guessing! I knew it was you." she jokingly lies while trying to clean up the coffee off her.

He laughs "Ha, well I just wanted to see what you were up to beautiful."

"oh nothing, cleaning up coffee i spilled, the phone freaked me out. There was nothing on tv either...*sigh* I'm so bored with life"

"well i was thinking of taking you out somewhere later, do you know what today is?"

"ha are yu kiidding me?? its our first year anniversary, id never forget that." she laughs.

"I was hoping you'd remember. so what do you say you up for having a nice day with each other?"

"of course i am!! I'll call you in about an hour darlin" she responds.

"ok sweetie I will look forward to your future phone call, i love you!"

" I love you too" She hangs up the phone nad takes a sip of her coffee. She smiles. she can't wait to see him today she hasn't had a nice day with him for about a month, they have both been busy with their school work. shes a senior in high school and hes a freshman in college. He lives with his parents and so does she, he decided not to get a dorm since he doesn't live that far away.

She tells her mother her plans for the day and her mom is fine with it. She gets into the shower and afterwards gives victor a call.

"hey sweetie i just wanted to let you know we are on for the night Stop by my house at about 1." Iit was 11:30 at that time.

"ok, I'll be there a little before 1 babe. I need to run some errands and I'll be there."

they say their goodbyes and she goes to her room to pick out a nice outfit. She decides a nice pair of black pin striped pants, a hot pink shiny shirt with a black long sleeved shirt that just covers her upper part of her body, and a nice pair of black high heeled boots. it looks good, casual, classy, and stylish. she also gets a pearl necklace and pearl earings to wear. she straigtens her medium lengthed blonde hair, puts on a touch of pink eye shadow, a little foundation, and a slightly tinted pink lip gloss on as well. just as shes finished putting on her favorite bodyspray she hears victor knock at the door.

he walks in with a bouquet of pink flowers with silver glitter on them, hes wearing a nice pair of jeans, a pinstriped black shirt and a loosened blue tie, with a casual pair of sneakers. 

he turns around to see his lovely lady standing before him.

"you look beautiful babe." he smiles and gives her a soft kiss on her soft cheek.

"you look quite handsome yourself. its amazing how we can transform to wife beaters, band tees, boxers and shorts and messy hair to such a hott looking couple hehe" she kaughs and hugs him tight. "so are you ready?"

"of course my darling" 

"ok lemme put these flowers in a vase" 

victor then sticks out his arm and she links hers with his. they walk out the door and he opens his car door for her. they drive a couple towns over to a nice restaurant. they pull up and he helps her out... he has a whole section reserved for them.

the hostess leads them to their seats.

kate says "victor you are too sweet this is so amazing thank you so much for doing this for me!"

"this is only the beginning. the day is young" he smiles and grabs her hand and kisses it softly.

They order their meals and talk about the wonderful year they had together.

Kate asks "victor, i dont think any guy could possibly TRY to be as great as you, why have you been with me so long?"

victor replies "Why shouldnt i be? You have such a wonderful personality and attractive physical features. you make me laugh no matter how i feel, you make me melt with you laugh, your smile, your eyes...  your body is so amazing and beautiful, its perfect to say the least! I feel like nothing matters when im with you."

kate smiles and gets tears in her eyes, shes so happy to hear words from him. she had only been treated badly with other guys she had been with. he was different, but he had some mystry about him she just couldnt figure out. "i appreciate your words victor, they mean a lot to me. so, what is there about you i dont know? we have been together for a year now and i still feel like theres something about you i dont know."

he glares at her "what do you mean?! I have told you everyhting, theres nothing more to know!"

Kate leans back "victor, theres no need to get angry, it was just a question, I'm sorry"

He looks at her and says "no no, I'm sorry there was no reason for me to be rude to you."

Their food arrives and they eat and talk. they laugh and have a wonderful dinner. he gets the bill and he take her hand and leads her to the car. kate thought this night was way too great for anything bad to happen.

Victor starts the car and turns down the road "umm victor?"

"yes babe?" he asks.

"isnt home the other way?"

"yeah it is, but i have a suprise for you" He grabs her hand without letting his eyes off the road. she smiles and sits and cant wait for her suprise. they turn down a small back road with no street lights. she starts to feel uneasy but she trusts him, he is her boyfriend after all. they keep going to where there is nothing but a small farm house in sight. he parks the car in a midst of trees and fields.

"so this is the suprise?" she asks.

"well, kind of" he turns off the car the only lights they have is on the radio. "i wanted to show you the stars, theres no light out here so its easier to see them."

She sighs in relief and they lay on the hood of his car looking at the stars laughing. after awhile it gets awkwardly silent. he tells her "you know how at dinner you asked if there was something i didnt tell you?"

she looks at him slightly ans replies "yes.."

"well, hmph i do have a secret"

"what is it?" he grabs her by the thraot and slams her against the hood of a car.

"I'm a rapist and a murderer." She can see his grin in the middle of the night with the small light of a full moon. shes scared and a loss of words and can only scream and beg him to let go of her. he begins to take her clothes off and he takes off his while still managing not to let her go.

she gasps and asks him why he is doing this to her, she thought they has something. so many things going through her head. she has had sex with him before but this was scary, it wasnt for love, but if we've had sex why would he want to hurt me and rape me. she told him "victor why are u doing this i thought u lvoed me, i love you, wheres that careing guy at dinner?!" he stops.

he looks at her. she is in tears she is strainging to breath. he lets go of her throat and looks at hwat hes doing. she looks at him "why did you stop? i thought.."

"shut up!! i dont know what im doing.... agh put your clothes back on... ill drive you home."

he dresses and she puts her clothes back on. she  doesnt understand what came over him. i thought he wanted to kill me she thought. she stares longingly at him as he drives home.

"pull the car over," kate says"now!"

he looks at her and sees shes serious and pulls the car over. he puts it in park and turns it off. he sighs and cant look at her.

"you're lieing to me arnt you?" she asks.

"about what?" he still wont look at her.

"you being a rapist and murderer. we've had sex before, why would raping me make you any happier. I am so scared and i dont even know who you are now. have you lied to me this whole time?"

"no. im not a rapist, im not a murderer, i dont know what came over me, it was stupid i dont know if i can ever look at you again. i feel like a total moron. this was suppose to be me and yours night. im ruining it and i beg you not to tell anyone of the happenings that went on."

she puts her hand on his face and he flinches slightly. hes afraid she will hate him forever. she pulls his face toward hers and kisses him. he begins to cry, but refuses to admit he is.

"sweetie, i really dont get it, i dont know why you would say something like that. it makes no since. i still love you, but if this ever happens again i will leave you and i will enver speak with you again"

he looks at her and promises her. he drives her home and she changes into her bed clothes and goes ot bed. 

she wakes up later than usual that morning around noon. she wakes up and smells the puppy he gave her. she always wakes up with a note next to it, it reads:

dearest kate,

happy first year anniversary. I would of called you but i think this is better. I wanted to take you out tonight and have a lovely dinner for two in your favorite restaurant reserved jsut for us. call me when you get this. I can't wait to hear you voice

yours truly,
victor

she drops the note and laughs hysterically... it was jsut a dream.






hope you guys liked it i think its lame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!